4500 words law research paper 2

I’ve wrote an outline, but it’s not specific. You shouldn’t follow my outline, but needed to be more specifc.

Here is the feedback from the professor

“Thank you for your proposal.

You begin your essay talking about crime increasing- where?Please be clear about the jurisdiction in question.

Your essay is also very broad and as such,there is a risk that you will not say a great deal in any of the various sections.Perhaps you might start with the current proposal but refine it as you do more research. For example,there is likely to be greater value in considering the role of police in preventing crime and the efficacy ofthe various models of policing in preventing crime rather than generically covering police and courts.So continue reading and start to increase the focus of your essay as you go.”

You should use the reference format I’ve attached below. It’s AGLC 4. No plagiarism/ paraphrase

You must have a specific topic, and main claims at the beginning of the body paragraphs, arguments, and evidence from academic source as support.