Need marketing help to to improve a Personal marketing Plan

I worked on my personal marketing plan and the professor want me to improve my paper and he give me his comments:

It looks good, however, you should follow the example I sent. It shouldn’t be that long (2 pages maximum).

Also, what about the companies you would likely apply for a job? Include these changes and email to me

I inset my personal marketing plan that I did, and I inset the example that the professor told me about

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thank you