film essay editing revision

Hello! I need help editing an essay. Another studypool tutor wrote it, but I didn’t realize that there were so many grammar mistakes. Overall, it just doesn’t read like a good essay. Please only bid if you are VERY good at English and reading/writing. If there are grammar mistakes I will be requesting a refund. I also need the essay to have slightly less information about the aesthetics of film, and more information about the differences between European and American film. I’ve attached the essay below! Thank you!