Hello, is me again and this assignment is to edit the essay that you wrote before. please let me know if you can complete it within 12 hours? if not i will let others to do it.
1. Edit the paper base on the professor feedback
2.lots of the sentence is from the source, can you make it into your own words?
3. words do not need to be fancy, look like a regular college student writing will be enough.
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