revise my essay for english class it s a long essay in mla format i already have a rough draft just revise and improve

This a research essay with outside sources in my college English class, and it should be related to a book.

I may need one more body paragraph with main point.

And please fix my language ,grammar, and organization and so on.

I want to get a score of B+ (87%) A will be excellent! Thank you so much !!!

I will send you rubric and requirement.