This is a game scripts.help me revise it

Here the requirement from the professor.

Write a dungeon of history! Must include from 10 authors we have read and can include historical game characters. Must include at least 10 rooms, with scripts of what the characters in the room say or ask the player when they enter the room.

Here’s my request:

1. It should be use present tense, I seem to use the past tense in some places.

2. Welcome to help me modify my story, you can add some description of the environment

3. Please help me check my grammar. My grammar is really bad


Thank you very much for your help. If you have any questions, please leave me a message.

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