You show no bias to either side

just add more information to the document Attached. don’t do a new paper research

You show no bias to either side, your references match your in-text citations and that you fix any grammar and spelling errors. It does not reflect how you are going to be graded on your research in the final other than you are going in the right directions but need a lot more research under each key point.

Remember a minimum of one page per Key points for a good passing grade and over eight pages of content for an excellent grade. You are on your way to getting a good grade in your rough draft and remember to go above and beyond in your final. So far so good just more research on the key points to bring it up to minimum 6-8 pages for your content for an excellent grade in your final. Please remember that you must follow the requirements and made any corrections that were needed. Your final paper should address the following key points: on the paper